I know no temple,
I know no rules,
I know myself, And for what I want I do fight,
I know I am right.
I know not what is next,
I know not what is past,
I make my own destiny And I carry the light.
I know I am right.
I know not what is life,
I know not what is death.
I have faith in myself and I will be remembered till sun is there in sight,
I know I am right.
11 comments:
You are right..but..the last paragraph is a prophecy..Wish it comes true...
cheers!!
It's very good.......
looking forward for more new thoughts...
It shows one's confidence level
A good one...keep on going
I hereby entitle you the prince of prose.
Keep going, the crown is still un-encroached.
arey bap re santo,thanks
but seems too much for me now .... I still have a long way to go ....
well thanks again for encouragement ....
It's really very nice.....
This poem tells about your nature man!!
Nice one..
Thanx
Adeesh Jain
Waiting for ur next poem :-)...
Greetings !
I will start with +ive thaughts.
I say you have written good poems.
The thaught process and content in all the poems is very good.
"I know I am Right" and "The Prayer" looks amateur.But Inside Up ..and the Struggle are terrific.
I suggest you to start reading Ernest Hemingway, shakespear etc..so that you can fine tune the skill...
Last but not the least, dont stop it after sometime..keep going..
Cheers
Raman
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