Most of the people in this world think that almighty GOD has forced his will called "destiny" on us. These people accept everything that comes their way, and keep compromising in life,
taking it as GOD's will.
In my poem I call these people "Pine", a tree (with very limited consciousness) , as they walk their life asleep.
I feel lost in the forest
and I see no sign,
I have not seen any life around
and all I see in distance is pine
Days have passed
and I see few passers by
when I say "Hi"
they refuse to recognize
I feel tired and alone
and I wanna sleep,
Still I do walk
And refuse to creep
I give them a call
Rise in life and dont fall
God made us as his own,
destiny is not forced, and we r not pawn.
4 comments:
Good going...keep it up inspite of have too much work loads :-)
i mst say u have written quality lines.
dnt hve much knowledge abt poems bt wenever i read ur poems i feel very +ve.
Lovely!
Very insightful, very motivating!
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